Angel's fangs.

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Thursday, 04-Sep-2008 19:34:43

She stood in the dark, her body stood stalk still.
She was sexy as hell, and yet gave me the chills.
She was short, had hair that fell to her waist, and looked like a queen. But something about her made me think she was another type of being.
She smiled at me, that seductive smile. I thought I'd stay for a while.
Suddenly, without warning, she sprung for the attack.
There wasn't anything to do, no going back.
She sank her fangs deeply in to the flesh of my neck.
She did something I'll never forget.
Blood flowed from the wounds in to her mouth.
She savored it like the kiss of life. The pain was so deep it felt like a knife.
Later on that night, was when I felt the change. I had everything to loose, and everything to gain.

Post 2 by Gracesong (Zone BBS is my Life) on Saturday, 06-Dec-2008 21:52:47

Wow, the part about her sucking your blood was very vivid.
lol